Saturday, April 2, 2011

NaPoWriMo! Return of "Awesomeness" and entry numero uno!

I'm really very sick of Tumblr, so I'll use this for my NaPoWriMo entries. Hopefully they don't suck too hard....entry 1:

American God

Sitting in a supermarket
Praying for a light to spark it

Drowning in my favorite aisle
Choking on the latest style
But the lights never drop
Until your heart beat stops

So who is he?
Your American Jesus
My American God
The American dream
Taped up to a lightning rod

The entitled Messiah
Burning up your world

I may be sinking in a pool of sin
and self-prescribed medicine
But the American dream won't do me in
==================================================

Another one up later today/tonight. Toodles!

- Connor Mac
Posted by at

4 comments:

  1. Hyde Park Poetry PalaceApril 2, 2011 at 8:17 AM

    great job, Mac,
    keep it up.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Connor MacApril 2, 2011 at 7:35 PM

    Thank you!

    ReplyDelete
  3. Hyde Park Poetry PalaceApril 6, 2011 at 7:04 PM

    welcome join us,

    visit me for details.

    all entries will be fully represented by the end of the week.

    hope to see you in.

    ;)

    xx

    ReplyDelete
  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallApril 13, 2011 at 6:48 AM

    Glad to discover your poetry talent,

    join poets rally.
    make poetic friends, get encouragements via awards.

    come on in, the collection is to be closed within 26 hours.

    cheers.

    hope to see you in ASAP…..

    your talent rocks.

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)